I feel that Nick and I's work for the commercial was humorous and well. We could have done better but what we had finished and handad in is what we chose to do. I wish i improved this commercial by making the pace of the transitions a little slower and adding more information. However, I am pretty proud of this poroject but we could've done much better. I believe we should earn a B or B-, we Included everything beseides a statistic, another persuasive technique, and the lengeth of the video was pretty short.I had a great time on this topic and hope to do something similar again.
Robbie,great post. I liked how you really described how you did and what you deserved. I thought your commercial was funny just a little to fast like you said. Anyway, Overall great job.
ReplyDeleteThis was a nice post, and I agree that you should make the transitions slower- part of the commercial got cut off, and that made the "stick" part make no sense at all. I thought that the commercial was pretty funny, but I wanted to ask you: Did you have problems with the camera? The sounds sounded warped at some points, and some parts got cut off.
ReplyDeleteWhen Akash, Zachary and I were making the dwarf video, we were also having "technical difficulties" because Akash's camera was very sensitive to sound, and you could actually hear us breathing in some parts. Great post,bu to both you and Deshaune:watch the grammar mistakes.
OH MY GOD! LISTEN... first you say I make msitakes the then you say,"Great post,bu to both you and Deshaune:watch the grammar"... bu? What does that mean? Thats irony for you.
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