After you’ve gone Sri you will never go back! Sri Sri Energy includes anything any American cou ldask for. Contains, NO harsh ingredients, and also includes nutrients and vitamins to “GET YOUR SRI ON”!!! This is guaranteed to live up to its name, only a small amount of calories and great taste. Guaranteed to persuade you and others to buy Sri Sri Energy …Great taste and great price. Sri Sri Energy will give you long lasting energy. This is not your everyday drink or energizer; this is proved to keep you buying. Recently voted best in America, and best of all, it is F.D.A. approved. Sri Sri Energy includes great taste, energy, power and the feeling of the strength of god. Sri Energy Also contains a hyped up supplement of nutrients and electrolytes. Tastes great, fulfilling your taste buds, without the guilt of ridiculous calories. With only 64 calories, Sri Sri Energy destroys the competition…Period. Also comes in Flavors such as, Sri Original, Guru Grape, and the exclusive Melon Meditation. Aren’t you tired with the same old deal with boring drinks expensive prices, problems to your health? ...Don’t you think to yourself, “Why do I drink this, Why can’t I find a NEW great product?” Sri Sri Energy has it all! Once you have tried it you are proven to keep buying and buying. Also comes in an easy cheap price of only $1.50 each and a Six-pack for $5.00, BUT it also comes in a $7.00 12-pack!!! Energy drinks are bad for your health but once you try this it will change your mind set. Does not work body to flush out harsh chemicals, and ingredients, and causes no harm to liver or the kidneys. Sri Sri Energy will change the lives of everyday Americans. There is no reason NOT to love it! It has great flavors a great low price and has no harsh effects to your body and to your health. Sri Sri Energy destroys the competitors. So try it today. Guaranteed the consumer will love it.
Great job Robbie! I liked how you explained the product and why it should be sold in stores. You have all the requirements. I really like your product and hope to see it out one day.
ReplyDeleteThis was a really "energizing" post, and I felt it had a lot of power. Just be carefull with the direction, I felt that at some pints that it was directed more to the consumers and not the boardroom. RANDOM QUESTION ALERT: How do you get enough time to update your blog so much? Every time I come on, there is a new background, a new profile, and the fish change to the new team color.
ReplyDeleteSPELLING MISTAKE ALERT: I accidentally spelled "points" "pints".
ReplyDeleteYour post was great. It wasn't too long or too short. You explained the product, why they should show your commercial, and its nutritional value. The only bad thing was that you kept saying that it tastes great. Besides that your post was great.
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ReplyDeleteGood job! I liked the essay overall and it was persuading. I noticed that it has energy in it. There are, however, a few errors. For one, you wrote in the person at times. You also made a few grammar mistakes and there were no nouns in some sentences. For example, "Guaranteed the consumer will love it." Try to incorporate nouns or pronouns in every sentence. That example brings me to something else. The objective of the essay was to persuade the reader to sponser your product.
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