The controversial discussion of school uniforms has commenced. This will cause many problems including cost, and identification issues. But the most important of all is eradicating self-expression. Board of education offices have been debating over this topic for a while of K-12 school uniforms. School uniforms are a financial issue which may anguish many parents. Also the choice of putting the policy into place may cause school unity but arduous identification. Uniforms would not be reasonable and have too, too many possible problems. By accepting this policy it will enable preponderate problems. No improvement will be made to our schools after school uniforms.
School uniforms are problematic and will have no positive outcome. The utilization of
Uniforms will put an extreme stress on parent/guardians of students, and surely has no
Beneficial effect, on students K-12. People may claim they are cheap because they only
Need few outfits. But what they are not aware of is the guilt of fees due to buying another
Set of clothing for the summer. Clearly people are ignorant of the financial problems and hectic stress this can cause. Uniforms in this town will conclude self-expression. If you may ask a normal student their usual outfit, I am more than sure they will not respond with a “dress shirt and khakis, are my favorite!” Some may respond and say, well it is not the kid’s choice, it is up to the authority. This may be correct but the goal for teachers is to build students and lead them through a journey to a great life… not to burn impressions into their brains. With this deviation, where will expression grow with no freedom???What some probably do not mention is identification. Therefore, I am not saying the identification is precise and exemplary but uniforms will challenge this. A kid should not be labeled by what they wear, but a teacher should most likely notice them by their clothing. If everyone is the same… who is who? Where is he? Where is she? Opposing to this some will say unity is very important and will say, well we will see their face But the truth of this is nobody sees a student’s face 24-7. I cannot see any affect to the town with uniforms put into place. Studies show uniforms have no decrease in negative behavior and violence. This regulation will ignite the end of self-expression, financial stress and will cause challenging Identification. No beneficial transition will occur due to this policy.
Great job Robbie, I like your essay. You did a good job explaining your reasons.You have everything you need and it is written well. You fogot the name after the quote. Overall still great job.
ReplyDeleteGreat job with the sophisticated vocabulary, but you kind of "jumbled things around, like putting your thesis statement after the three reasons, but it was a really good post. Just be carefull with the weird capilizations... or is that a type of format?
ReplyDeleteI liked your post. It was the perfect lenghth. You explained well and used sophisticated vocabulary. Overall great job.
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