This blog post should be dedicated to an honorable advertisement. Not just a persuading one, but funny. I am introducing the sham wow guy/sham wow commercial. Recently a new cleaning device has been invented. Its apparently a cross between a shammy and a towel, made by the Germans. "Cant beat the Germans!, Your Gonna' love it !", says Vince the sham wow guy. This commercial displays the cleaning of messes ,moms around the world (esspecially mine) would love to clean with ease. It portrays cola,juice, coffe, anything. It soaks up the liquid and whats left behind underneath.
What is mostlty funny to me is what a dork this guy "Vince" is. I do not knnow what his trick is but he manages to sell these rip-offs in loony ways. Rip-offs such as the graty, the slap chop, the juicer. ALL terrible items. He is also beholded with the honor of getting beat up by a certain woman. This woman, was a specific part of society and tended to get her money in rather illegal and "different" ways.Ways in which cant be mentioned in the school vicinity. What had set her off was Vince had made a rather offenise gesture, which set her off to hook em' in the nose. He was definitly tought a lesson. After this both were charged in a certain offense, which shouldnt be remarked.
It amazes me that a goofball like him can make so much money putting his face on a screen. I wish I got that job, ..wouldve did better than him! Taking this job and entertaining americans, has given him a lot of cash...and black eyes. Good luck to Vince I am looking toward another corny device/commercial.
Robbie, you still make spelling mistakes and punctuation mistakes but I did like the blog. I liked how you compared yourself with the guy. Also I liked the details and description in it and that mmeans you put some hard work into it and hope you can keep this up. Any way great job.
ReplyDeletep.s I have a ShamWow and it really works.
Hey Robbie,
ReplyDeleteWhile I was reading I found some spelling mistakes and I also found some grammar mistakes. I liked the way that you explained everything about how you felt about that commercial. I also liked the text citation that you gave in the blog so we can know how he felt about the German's new invention. Like I said, nice job with your blog and maintain your hard work, and you will be batter than this!
That Sham Wow guy probably has to work really hard to sell the Sham Wow towels: people have actually made fun of them using a parody of a Spongebob episode (called Sham Wow patties), which means people think that Sham Wow towels are hopeless. Htere were some speling mistakes, but it was a nice post. (And Mr. Banju, you said Robbie had spelling mistakes and you made a spelling mistake yourself!) I never knew that the Sham Wow guy got beat up by such a freaky woman. That woman sends chills down my spine...
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Nice job, Robbie. Is the shamwow a ripoff? Like Deshaune and Banju Blog said, you had a few spelling mistakes. You might want to do a little more proofreading instead of including a section of on what this guy has done which has nothing to do with the product. It is shamoise not shammy. Beside for that the mistakes were silly. Good job.
ReplyDeleteSorry, spelled There wrong in the second sentence.
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ReplyDeleteI was just about to say that while commenting on the irony of Banju's having a spelling mistake while commenting on Robbie's you spelled there wrong. That's double irony for you.
ReplyDeleteRobbie,this was a great product to focus on. I, too, agree that the spelling mistakes need to be minimized. Rebecca, I liked your observation of the irony of spelling a word wrong in a sentence where she was criticizing the spelling of another person.
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